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    dots Submission Name: ..This.. This.. Insominadots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       I don't sleep often and when I do its for a great amont of time then.. I don't leave for nights after... sigh.. things will get better.. I hope

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    dots..This.. This.. Insominadots

    I cannot sleep
    For my mind will not quiet
    I cannot rest this body of mine
    So tired
    So fragile
    As it may be
    because my mind will contuine to carry on with thoughts ..
    That lead me nowhere but a dead end
    Can you not see..
    This insomina is getting the best of me
    This thing is taking a hold of my life ...
    And before I know it the sun is poking through the viberant blue clouds..
    And yet another restless..
    long..tiring day
    Shall begin...
    As for the end of this day..
    Will and forever will be unknown..

    Submitted on 2006-10-12 05:10:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ooooo thisis so good it's not even funny, i get what you mean in this work of art i understand the deeper meaning and its really touching it made me think about he mistajes i have recently made and regret i luv it!!! keep up the great [censored] work!!

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