I like the interesting twist you give at the end. I like the beginning how it's so great that you're with him, but at the end you realize you're not his first. It makes me look at things differently. Katana
this is a really good write. i cant pay attention in history either. it sicks when you really really like a guy and A) he knows it, but doesnt feel the same or B) doesnt know and you cant tell him. *sigh* oh well. i liked the lines "count the good qualities/all the right reasons" i like the way you organized it. adjectives, short sentences, and then the body of the poem. usually i hate picking poems apart like that, so i am sorry. anyway, really good write, good structure. keep it coming.