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    dots Submission Name: Creative Juicesdots
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    Author: dreamer37517
    ASL Info:    25/F/Bama
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 161/149/49
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCreative Juicesdots
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    My creative juices;
    They've all gone away.
    With no rhyming words,
    I've got little to say.

    I sit and I think,
    As my time ticks by.
    My mind feels empty,
    And I wonder why.

    One minute they're there,
    My thoughts flow freely.
    Then next they're gone,
    I can't think clearly.




    Submitted on 2006-10-12 15:30:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ashley:
    I like how the poem is about a lapse of creative thought, but by the end of the poem, you have a rhyme and rhythm. It's different, and that's awesome.
    ~Mykquillion
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by Mykquillion | [ Reply to This ]
      This is great. I think since i'm having writers block i should write one of these. That's cool. The only thing i'd change is the line: "I can't see clearly" I'd change it to: I can't think clearly. Great job. Fun read.

    Thanks for listening,

    Angel
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by chelseagirl077 | [ Reply to This ]


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