phrases construed, perception of depth scrutinized
image of self indulgence mirriored, miracles commence before my eyes
fathom the autocracy that effectuates the mortal soul
never to descend I thought, but now more than whole
forever endulged, if not for the pain of no participation
possessed as a mobile massacre, I credit the part your takin
never divulge the virgin intentions, a service required
postulate only your company, for all else I'm tired
yesterday broke forevers monotony, though lonely today
fresh tears suture dreams to reality, a heart on display.
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Submission Name: Truth Be Told
the only thing i Have to say is it could have been a bit more colorful and image filled, also the format you had it in made it a little hard to totally pay attention but at the same time I wanted to pay all of my attention because you had a lot of power in what you said. This was a beautiful write in such a way that it didnt' let the reader just daze through it and not think, it almost dared me to give my own meaning to what you were saying and, especially for such a relativly shot write, it gave me A LOT to think about. I loved this so much, definatly adding it to my faves, keep writing; I look forward to reading a lot more of your stuff
