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    dots Submission Name: Mcdreamy or Mcfinny?dots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I love Grey's Anatomy :)


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    dotsMcdreamy or Mcfinny?dots
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    Oh, Meredith
    whats your decision going to be?
    Inside you pace around
    though outside youre nonchalantly breezy

    McDreamy's
    got those piercing blue eyes
    and also a body for days
    though he hurts you with little white lies

    Oh Dr Finn
    youve done again
    youve made her heart skips beats
    you assured her that youll be there
    with everything thing she needs

    How do you choose
    and who will it be?
    Guess ill have to watch and see

    Will it be Mcdreamy
    or dr Mcfinny?
    Will you let one go
    or will both of them go?
    Do you choose trust
    or passion and lust?
    How do you choose?
    Which one will you lose?




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      Apart from not understanding the subtle details concerning the show.. because I've never watched it!

    I really enjoyed this, it was written quite entertainingly, because you took the facts from the show, and really incorporated your own questions, and character critiques into it.
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by Pprophet | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL, I like this mainly because I love Grey's Anatomy too! It is true though that Meredith is just like a breeze; she looks so eased on the outside but man is she dazed lol.

    I wonder....I mean I would love for her to have McDreamy lol (Dr. Shepherd :: drools!!::) but like he does deceive her a lot. Dr. Finn...he's too nice for me lol....I think that since Meredith is somewhat of a "breeze" she's a bit twisted so I say she should go with McDreamy. Hmmm what do you think?? Thanks for sharing..this made me smile tonight honestly..hehe

    ~darkrose16
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by darkrose16 | [ Reply to This ]


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