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    dots Submission Name: And You Could Care Less...dots
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    Author: im_disheveled
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       This is about my ex. whatever.


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    dotsAnd You Could Care Less...dots
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    3 oíclock in the morning....
    un-slept for hours.
    listening to the vibrating silence
    of tear drops falling on a satin pillowcase.

    I look ok, but Iím not myself.
    Iím staring through the darkness
    at that clock on the wall,
    and the phone isnít ringingÖ

    I think of her
    nestled in your arms,
    kissing your neck.
    Iím cursing my sheets;
    curse they cant keep me warm,
    like you used to.

    How many days have passed now?
    Something for sure is leaving me.
    The reason why it hesitates
    is because Iím on my kneeís and Iím bleeding;
    I need it to stay.

    4 oíclock in the morning.
    Something has to snap soon.
    Your broken picture frame leaves
    pieces of soft ceramic and porcelain
    scattered across the floor.

    Iím shuddering as I ponder thoughts of
    ďhave we forgotten how to love?Ē
    and I remembered too lateÖ
    I always believed time was relative.

    You said you wanted me;
    Whispered into my ear that I was ďyour babyĒ.
    Well fuck off.
    When I said to run, I didnít mean into the arms of another.

    In the beginning, we were such similar people
    and weíve taken quite a ride.
    Itís 5 in the morning and Iím still thinking about you.
    ...And its so hard at 5 oíclock in the morning
    to sleep without you.




    Submitted on 2006-10-12 21:53:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Allow me to pinpoint my favorite points in this...

    "Iím cursing my sheets;
    curse they cant keep me warm,
    like you used to."


    "Itís 5 in the morning and Iím still thinking about you.
    ...And its so hard at 5 oíclock in the morning
    to sleep without you."

    I could really apreciate the way these select passages were worded, I really felt they expressed a similiar experience for myself as of late. you did a good job of not only expressing your own emotion, but mine when I'm able to relate.
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by Pprophet | [ Reply to This ]
      I suppose the correct term would be "and you couldn't care less", because if he *could* care less, that would mean he *did* care, even just a bit.

    Yours truly,
    Nobody.
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]


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