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    dots Submission Name: Where Does All The Water Godots
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    Author: Dispair
    ASL Info:    23/m/qld
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 15/38/35
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 133
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsWhere Does All The Water Godots
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    Who are you
    Your not the person I fell in love with
    Your smile has disappeared
    The spark in your eyes have faded
    The love in your voice has withered
    Who are you I do not know
    When we first met
    Your love for me was so convicted
    You made me feel warm in the cold night
    Just by saying you loved me
    You brought out feelings in me
    I never knew I had
    Where have you gone
    Before me stands a likeness but it can’t be you
    No smile, no spark, no love
    Not you
    I fell for the girl who laughed at my jokes
    Cries at my sorrows when I speak of them
    Loved me for who I was
    Maybe we have both changed
    Both stopped smiling
    Both lost the spark
    And both fallen from love
    But how can this be
    My feelings are still there
    Every time I stare at your photo’s
    I lose myself for hours
    Lost in your eyes and in your smile
    Memories of our love flood back
    But it’s different when you are there
    I can’t stall my anger
    I can’t hide my suffering anymore
    You touched my like none other
    You made me feel alive
    But now I feel dead
    Because your not the same anymore
    I cry so hard and the tears just flow
    But where does all the water go




    Submitted on 2006-10-13 01:45:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This one is favorite worthy. perhaps because i can relate to it or because its simply well written. you can really tell the hurt and anguish around the missle where you realize that the relationship is not what it used to be. kudos x2, my friend.
    ~Max Ryder
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Max R. | [ Reply to This ]


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