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    dots Submission Name: My words...dots
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    Author: Non-Sens-Uality
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 67/80/53
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       For my muse...


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    dotsMy words...dots
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    My destiny, in blood is written -
    Symbols of silver flames
    My thoughts - a serpent, dark and distant,
    Swimming in enchanting games...

    My mind - just chaos - of blue glitter,
    In search for the divine
    My words - so sweet, and then so bitter,
    In shadows of a lost sunshine...




    Submitted on 2006-10-13 09:33:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you picked the simplest words to create such beauty.
    this is brilliant.
    i totally agree with Porcelaine.
    the style in writing, you don't see alot.
    nicely written.

    <bleedingtears>
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      My destiny, my thoughts, my mind, my words: if you wrote of your life it wouldn't be different because these four are the foundations of life. You know what you're doing. Your poetry is absolutely different then anything I've ever read in style and the idealistic approach. That was a compliment by the way, just in case you were wondering. Excellent piece.
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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