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    dots Submission Name: Let Us Talkdots
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    Author: Max R.
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 33/29/17
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       somethin i wrote up when i was told i couldnt talk about topics people found "disturbing"


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    dotsLet Us Talkdots
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    Let us talk about violence
    Let us alk about rape
    Let us talk about the things
    We try and escape

    Let us talk about hate
    Let us talk about fear
    Let us talk about the things
    We all hold dear

    Let us talk about me
    Let us talk about you
    Let us talk about the dreams
    That never came true

    But most of all
    Lets all stand tall
    And let us talk




    Submitted on 2006-10-13 10:35:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Though these words are so simple, they are also so powerful. Maybe if these things were discussed more, they wouldn't happen so often. People are going to educate themselves in one way or another, whether it be by talking or doing....and frankly, I'd prefer the talking.

    nicely done

    N.K
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Never Known | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, this is so true; I loved the concept you were throwing out here; just because something is "disturbing" or not something we like to talk about does not mean it should go ignored and ignoring it doesn't make it any better or make it go away. Personally I've been described as a very "disturbing" "demented" person just because I don't believe in censoring the truth; but in the long run, there's really nothing kinda about leaving topics alone just becasue they aren't your preferred discussion. I really liked this write and can't wait to read more of yours
    welcome to ES,
    ~jess
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      i do like this one and i do have to agree.
    i do also agree with Ronswords.
    some of those things people really do hate to talk about and they can be "disturbing" but they also do need to be discussed like you say.
    and the rhyme fit very well.

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    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      Max
    This is very true
    I dont know if this is what you were going for but I believe you were touching on the topic of censorship in our society
    It is true that in a lot of places in the World you cant say what you truly nfeel without getting into some serious trouble and in some countries even death
    Very well said and worded
    I llok forward to reading more new writes from you
    God Bless
    Ron

    And Please allow me to be one of the first to Welcome you to Elite Skills
    I hope this site brings you all the Happiness it has brought to me
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    And again WELCOME!!!
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      wow thx for ur comments most of all wow this is short but sweet,i understand ur a new user?well awsome write and welocme to elite!if u have qu or need someone to talk to im all ways here!!
    | Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]


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