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    dots Submission Name: ?And I Ask?dots
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    Author: disturbedx1000
    ASL Info:    28/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 204/326/124
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 834
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1592



    Description:
       i've been stuck in one type of genre due to some recent events but that helps me b/c i find i've been comeing up with some sick ass songs latly. enjoy


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    dots?And I Ask?dots
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    ...what gave you the will to recover?
    ...when all of our love has been missing?

    i wont cry no more-
    i don't cry no more,

    so why do i still hurt-
    hurt this deep inside,

    with these dry eyes-
    i cry out my soul,

    and i ask why...
    and i ask YOU!

    (chorus)

    is this this what i wanted for so long?
    is this what was destined to become?

    now i lost YOU!

    would we remain together for so long,
    if we had loved another... all along?

    is this all becuase... i loved YOU?!

    (end)

    if everything BURNS!?
    what becomes of LIFE!?

    and i ask why...
    and i ask YOU!

    (chorus)

    is this this what i wanted for so long?
    is this what was destined to become?

    now i lost YOU!

    would we remain together for so long,
    if we had loved another... all along?

    is this all becuase... i loved YOU?!

    (end)

    these years gone BY!
    i still wonder WHY?!

    did i love you...

    (chorus)

    is this this what i wanted for so long?
    is this what was destined to become?

    now i lost YOU!

    would we remain together for so long,
    if we had loved another... all along?

    is this all becuase... i loved YOU?!

    (end)

    and i ask why...
    ... and i ask you...




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    ||| Comments |||
      Hah that's weird, I thought of Staind when I was reading this too... except I imagined occasional screaming.
    I could be waaaay off though.
    It sounds so sad, but angry at the same time.
    I like this. I never could write lyrics. Don't know why... but like most things (for me), it proved too challenging lol

    Like I always say, at least bad things inspire wonderful poetry (or songs, in this case).

    Anyways, I don't have anything negative to say about this.

    Very nicely done
    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      I completely love lyrics, and you have done an awesome job here. The only bad thing about reading lyrics is one has to try to picture the speed, tone, style of the music itself, which sometimes can make it hard to get the whole effect of the lyrics..I had this pictured in my head as a sort of Staind sound, which is neither fast nor slow wicked rock kind of music. And frankly, in my head that sooooo worked with this.

    well done

    N.K
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Never Known | [ Reply to This ]


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