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    dots Submission Name: This jealousy is poison.dots
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    Author: Xx_bang_bang_
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    dotsThis jealousy is poison.dots
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    This jealousy is poison

    I知 hiding away from it all.
    I can稚 always stand tall.
    Sometimes I break down.
    I just hope no-one
    Will be around

    I知 tired of always being second best
    Why am I always worse than the rest?
    I知 using up all my energy
    to be the brightest star.
    But I知 out shined once again.

    I知 trying to block the tears.
    Trying to forget my fears.
    Trying not to scream
    Trying to escape the dream

    But I知 tired of always being second best
    Why am I always worse than the rest?
    I知 using up all my energy,
    to be the brightest star.
    But I知 out shined once again.

    I知 tired of my jealousy.
    Clouding up my head
    I知 trying not to fucking scream
    While I lie awake in bed

    Fuck your fucking personality.
    You sicken me to no end
    Scum of a person
    But everyone thinks you're royalty

    Yet I知 tired of always being second best
    Why am I always worse than the rest?
    I知 using up all my energy
    to be the brightest star.
    But I知 out shined once again.

    This jealousy is poison,
    running through my veins.
    This jealousy is poison,
    causing all the pain.
    This jealousy is fucking poison.




    Submitted on 2006-10-14 05:57:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is super good
    i can relate alot
    i used to feel exactly like this until i realized that
    there's always going to be someone who's better so all you can do is be thankful for what you do have
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      It's very well made, the anger and confusion radiates from it. The rhyming works and the imagery is good, could be a bit shorter or have more depth, but it was a very nice piece.
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by mikepyro7 | [ Reply to This ]
      i can definitely relate to this. but theres no use trying to be someone you're not. everyone's special in their own way. someone somewhere will notice you someday. all the best!
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by tina_mik | [ Reply to This ]



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