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    dots Submission Name: FREEdots
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    Author: KAE
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 85
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1089



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    dotsFREEdots
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    ICE COLD
    FROZEN HOLD
    ALL THESE LIES ALWAYS TOLD
    TIED TIGHT NOTHINGS RIGHT
    LOOKING FOR AN EASY FIGHT
    TINY RIDDLES IN A MAZE
    NEVER HERE ALWAYS DAZED
    FINDING TRUTH WITHIN A BLAZE
    SINKIN IN A PURPLE HAZE
    BLOOD SHED
    A TEAR FALLS
    LONG DARK DEEP HALLS
    A STAB IN THE BACK
    THERES MORE I LACK
    KNOWING THAT I MUST LOOK BACK
    HAUNTING GHOSTS
    PAINFUL SHIRKS
    DEEP WITHIN WE ALL ARE FREEKS
    MIND CRAZED
    GONE INSANE
    A MESS OF FEAR IS HEAR TO RAIN
    I FIND NEW LIFE WITHIN A BLADE
    KNOWING THE PAIN WILL NEVER FADE
    HANDS TIED
    FREELY BOUND
    LOOSING BREATH
    BOUT TO DROWN
    DEEP BREATH
    QUICKLY GASP
    I SEE MY LIFE I CANNOT GRASP
    SLOWLY I FAINTLY FALL ASLEEP
    HERE IN SILENCE I DEEPLY DREEM
    IS IT REAL OR JUST A SCHEEM
    THERE IS NO HURT THERE IS NO PAIN
    THERE ARE NO CLOUDS OR SIGHT OF RAIN
    THE ROPE IS CUT
    IM FINALLY FREE
    IM FREE IM FREE
    IM FREE TO BE




    Submitted on 2006-10-14 05:58:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked it. Good job but all I can say is this was a good read. It's your poetry so it's in what ever format u chose to use.
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]



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