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    dots Submission Name: Loves Lessonsdots
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    Author: StanKross
    ASL Info:    26/M/ON Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 13/28/17
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 716
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsLoves Lessonsdots
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    Love is an uncalculated risk
    Yes, your heart may end up broken
    But in the end is worth the trip
    Understand that things come and go
    But itís the things you pick up along the way
    Itís what you learn not what you know.

    Tears are a necessity of life
    Theyíre there to remind you that youíre only human
    Heartaches are not uncommon, there for certain.

    So keep your head up, even when youíre fed up
    Through the break upís and the make upís
    Take nothing for granted, because youíll miss it when itís gone
    Love intensely, and hope for the same in return.

    Donít be afraid fail, youíre bound to take the occasional fall
    It happens to the best of us, it happens to us all
    Give yourself to the wind, spread your wings
    Be grateful for life and the knowledge it brings.

    Love, itís in you to give, take it every chance you get
    Because even when it hurts, even at its worst
    Itís still a gift.




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      Great poem. really it inspired me to open my eyes to the notion of love,
    "Because even when it hurts, even at its worst
    Itís still a gift."
    i think these two lines are so powerful and truthful. really great work even delves into subconscious that dwells within everyone. i think you managed to really express your views emphatically and directly. nice use of imagery and descriptive language. hope to read more

    Tom
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Tomato | [ Reply to This ]


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