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    dots Submission Name: Time for Changedots
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    Author: Luanne
    ASL Info:    35/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 11/0/2
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 122
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    dotsTime for Changedots
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    Most of my life I've felt powerless, never stood up for myself
    small tiny sapling blowing in the cold, piercing wind
    waiting scared for every storm to pass, alone
    my conscience, my controversy rival


    Better to fight my mind, than take a chance on love, I thought


    The wind my only nonjudgmental friend, silently listening
    cold at times, yet still warmly embracing
    drying my tear stained eyes with soft gentleness
    sweeping over me, cleansing my soul


    My secrets kept, with one who speaks no words


    Now today, as I've grown older, wiser through the years
    realizing the wind can never replace human friendship and love
    when in search for truth and answers, the wind shall remain silent
    warm and gentle upon our face, yet cold to our broken hearts


    Those whom love us do not give their silence, but makes us face reality


    Listen to the wind blowing, millions of secrets and sadness it holds
    warm yourself in it's soft gentle breeze, yet you still remain alone
    alone, sad, unloved, what would be the purpose of our life ?
    it's the love of partners, children, friends, that bring meaning to our lives

    ............If we never take chances and share our love...........
    ............ We will forever be, a lonesome dying soul .............
    ....................................Alone.............................................
    ............................Blowing in the wind ...........................




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    ||| Comments |||
      I could have sworn that I commented on this!

    I wonder why I didn't, because it's excellent.

    It reminds me of sweet and sour chicken. It's good, but it tells you the harsh truth, while coaxing you with it's sweety goodness.

    Bad example, I know.

    But, this piece has a lot of creativty, and logic.

    -Charlese
    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by Yclipse | [ Reply to This ]
      This is wonderful, Luanne! Love first wounds us, then, if we are lucky and it's the right kind of love, commences to heal us! Thus it is both pain and pleasure, and if we're lucky, the healing lasts a lifetime! You have artistic instincts that are a joy to read!
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought it is perfect the way it is. Your imagery is very good and the idea of the wind as a close friend is again very original.

    Welcome to the site.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      this is REALLY good. I little choppy in areas but a enjoyable read. I'm going to add this one to my Favs!
    Thanks

    ~javajunkie~

    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by javajunkie | [ Reply to This ]



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