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    dots Submission Name: Convenient kind of girldots
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    Author: Charlie Poppins
    ASL Info:    22, female, England
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 71/85/65
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsConvenient kind of girldots
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    Never noticed you teaching me to hate myself
    but it kinda helps me along,
    don't get much disappointment and if i do it won't last long.
    Now i wait to be left out cold,
    held for a while to please some guy until the record gets old.
    Seen so many come and go,
    pretend they care when we both know-

    ch:
    I'm a convenient kind of girl,
    good to take out from time to time
    and pretend that i won't care,
    when im left standing and cast aside
    i'll leave you guilty free so you don't have to feel for me, i'm a convenient kinda girl.

    Guess it's that time again,
    to convince another i'm a no-go zone,
    eac h time it gets no easier,
    i just feel more alone.
    Yeah it seems there's no point in falling
    when i could fall ten different ways,
    but who said soul mates come in pairs,
    who chose to measure life in days?

    ch:
    I'm a convenient kind of girl,
    good to take out from time to time
    and pretend that i won't care,
    when im left standing and cast aside
    i'll leave you guilty free so you don't have to feel for me, i'm a convenient kinda girl.

    i know we've all got a choice,
    but all paths leave me redundant,
    stood still as people come and go,
    company abundant.
    still feeling like im loose even when im all laced up,
    wondering if i'll ever care again,
    even if i don't find love.




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      whoa I so want to like sing this for you as it is being sung in my head
    wow Like seriously this is a fav
    the words just fit togetner like a puzzle but tell a story thats meaningful and true
    I feel that I have been this girl before
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by xSaraHx | [ Reply to This ]
      The chorus was brilliant, because it was simple and catchy. it's something people will have no problem forgetting.

    The song as a whole, is a pretty good song because it's strongly worded, and will be something people will have no problem relating to.
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by Pprophet | [ Reply to This ]
      i can feel this song big time. i really loved it. the chorus was amazing and i can see this become a great song.
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ]


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