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Looking Good

Author: Von Django
ASL Info:    32/M/UK
Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 119 /148 /32
Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
Total Views: 1468
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Looking Good

I found your spat-out heart
In a brown paper bag
Soaked through
With blood and greasy tears
Your body further down the street
All the better for it

Submitted on 2006-10-15 10:19:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I wonder, If I spit out my heart (or should I say, what is left of it) would I look better?

Not much of a comment I know…I’m not that skilful commenter…
| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Poly Jean | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked the poem. short succint and to the point. i personally wouldnt change any of it. so good work, hope to read more.

| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Tomato | [ Reply to This ]

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