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Submission Name:
Looking Good
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Author:
Von Django
ASL Info:
32/M/UK
Elite Ratio:
3.79 - 119/148/32
Words:
30
Class/Type:
Poetry/Nostalgia
Total Views:
259
Average Vote:
4.0000
Bytes:
198
Description:
Looking Good
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I found your spat-out heart
In a brown paper bag
Soaked through
With blood and greasy tears
Your body further down the street
Looking
All the better for it
Submitted on 2006-10-15 10:19:23
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I wonder, If I spit out my heart (or should I say, what is left of it) would I look better?
Not much of a comment I know…I’m not that skilful commenter…
| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by
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i liked the poem. short succint and to the point. i personally wouldnt change any of it. so good work, hope to read more.
Tom
| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by
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