excomunicate me, my god
hanging me from a black cross
blood flowing from open wounds
upon a world raped for you
eyes falling distantly somber
upon my sweet abysmal grave
for the broken, bleeding soul
that you just, couldn't save!
This is me,
smiling in black!
this is me,
take it or leave it!
dominatrix of the withcing hour
so submissive, feel the power?
even in the darkest of dreams
bloodshed nightmares curdling screams!
can you feel these words pentrate?
narcasstic "god" with a condeming fate
another line of blasphemous misery
I guess it's just what worx for me!
I scream along with my misery!
I scream to keep me, alive;
I scream to remove the demons,
though in vain, i will die!
this is me,
take it or leave it!
this is me
smiling in black!
this is me,
smiling in black;
this is me,
saying good bye! |
Submission Name: smiling in black
*pouts only cause she's really sad and feels like being emo today....tonight....whatever.* narcassitic and blasphemous are some of the kewlest words in existance; probably explaining why I almost never use them....I'd be kewl if I were dead but that's an entirely different matter altogether. I liked this one a lot; probably cause it brought a lot of disturbing images to mind; although i do gotta say you can be one super-depressing writer sometimes
now I feel like I gotta be more depressing or I'll be a failure there too....what the [censored] am I talking about? I am a failure as a writer; thus explaining my inability to write anything worth reading. (like this comment, yep.) [censored] I'm ranting aren't I? * goes to panic by herself in a corner b/c she won't be wasting anyone else's time there.*