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The <<<<((((ECHO))))>>>>

Author:	SinCeer05
ASL Info:	21mVA
Elite Ratio:	3.27 - 243 /279 /168
Words:	166

Class/Type:	Poetry /Love
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just a short freestyle.....nothin serious

The <<<<((((ECHO))))>>>>

I revert to say let-go, but you act to stand and bounce back like an echo
I walk through lies, while you speak false statements
you talk with ya eyes you could say there lost in amazement
im deep as the ocean is blue, hopin for you,
headaches of thought like the commotion is screwed
im lookin for that four leaf clover to give me some luck
Im tryin to close this door, its over, but the carpet is stuck
inner voices advise an distract-tasks, knowledge of truth is missed becuz the facts-pass
with high tones, I still hear sighs on the phone, the pitch is sharp enough to crack-glass
I loathe reality, betroth this casualty, trial an error but im still enclosed so passionately
its like tug of war with 4 ropes
im getting dragged and pulled till my core chokes
like a frozen river my blood flows with no heat
im emblazoned to shiver without love an my souls bleak

Submitted on 2006-10-15 21:47:52 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this was amazing. ur metaphors were so creative in this one. i gotta give u props.

I revert to say let-go, but you act to stand and bounce back like an echo

im deep as the ocean is blue, hopin for you,
headaches of thought like the commotion is screwed

inner voices advise an distract-tasks, knowledge of truth is missed becuz the facts-pass
with high tones, I still hear sighs on the phone, the pitch is sharp enough to crack-glass
I loathe reality, betroth this casualty, trial an error but im still enclosed so passionately
its like tug of war with 4 ropes
im getting dragged and pulled till my core chokes

all ill [censored]. definite fave

| Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

correct me if i'm wrong, but are you trying to escape from someone or something? i read this twice, and that is what it seems to say to me.
i love the last two lines, it's like a look deep inside yourself, and then realisation.
whirl**

| Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]

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