No regret

Author: MysterydarkPoet ASL Info:    20/f/Aust Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173 Words: 122

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No regret

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Tell me; was it all just a dream? Cause I remember clearly The look you gave me It shattered the heart inside of me With a tear Escaping your eye You turned to me And whispered a lie But for every time you lied For every false word you spoke Was another 10,000 tears I cried And another part of me that broke But I try to hard To seek security And I get scarred So easily But for every time my heart burned It was never in vain It was a lesson well learned Courtesy to the pain After all we went through This is what we get Even after you There’s still no regret

Submitted on 2006-10-16 05:20:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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FINALLY, someone who isnt blaming all thier problems on others! i know i have done that before, but now, as it seems you do as well, i see everything, good or bad, as a self-inflicted lesson, a good thing to know and catalogue for later use. "But for every time my heart burned It was never in vain It was a lesson well learned Courtesy to the pain " the whole poem was good, but i loved this part. and when you couple it with the earlier stanza where you take responcibility for your actions, it just screams truth at me. sorry i know that was gushing, but i really like it, and i cant find anything gramatically wrong with it, nor would i want to! ryeker

| Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by ryeker03 | [ Reply to This ]

i know how it feels to be lied to and have a broken heart because of it but in the end the pain was nothing and i felt nothing. it is a good poem, not to long not to short and the rhyming is good. love it darls xx Chanyn

| Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by Shark06 | [ Reply to This ]

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