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Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 122
Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
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No regret

Tell me; was it all just a dream?
Cause I remember clearly
The look you gave me
It shattered the heart inside of me

With a tear
Escaping your eye
You turned to me
And whispered a lie

But for every time you lied
For every false word you spoke
Was another 10,000 tears I cried
And another part of me that broke

But I try to hard
To seek security
And I get scarred
So easily

But for every time my heart burned
It was never in vain
It was a lesson well learned
Courtesy to the pain

After all we went through
This is what we get
Even after you
There’s still no regret

Submitted on 2006-10-16 05:20:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  FINALLY, someone who isnt blaming all thier problems on others! i know i have done that before, but now, as it seems you do as well, i see everything, good or bad, as a self-inflicted lesson, a good thing to know and catalogue for later use.
"But for every time my heart burned
It was never in vain
It was a lesson well learned
Courtesy to the pain "
the whole poem was good, but i loved this part. and when you couple it with the earlier stanza where you take responcibility for your actions, it just screams truth at me. sorry i know that was gushing, but i really like it, and i cant find anything gramatically wrong with it, nor would i want to!
| Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by ryeker03 | [ Reply to This ]
  i know how it feels to be lied to and have a broken heart because of it but in the end the pain was nothing and i felt nothing. it is a good poem, not to long not to short and the rhyming is good. love it darls

| Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by Shark06 | [ Reply to This ]

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