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Prom Night

Author: Max R.
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Words: 114
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Prom Night

The girls get all pretty
The boys fix their ties
Moms starts to cry
Dads start to curse
All around town
Seniors are happy
Its prom night for them
And boy, are they ready
But one lone girl
Sits at home
She too is a senior
But can’t go to prom
Her boyfriend is gone
He took all the money
Gone out to drink
And leave her at home, all alone
This girl chose this boy
This boy chose his drink
There is no happy ending
For the girl who didn’t think
And now she’s pregnant
Her parents hate her
The is no happy ending
For the girl who didn’t think

Submitted on 2006-10-16 10:35:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's sad how teens end up that way. The choices we make. I'm currently stuck in the middle of one, but I won't make that choice. I know where it leads and I have too much to live for to fall for it. I am adding this to my favorites.
| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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