Prom Night

Author: Max R. Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 33 /29 /17 Words: 114

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Prom Night

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The girls get all pretty The boys fix their ties Moms starts to cry Dads start to curse All around town Seniors are happy Its prom night for them And boy, are they ready But one lone girl Sits at home She too is a senior But can’t go to prom Her boyfriend is gone He took all the money Gone out to drink And leave her at home, all alone This girl chose this boy This boy chose his drink There is no happy ending For the girl who didn’t think And now she’s pregnant Her parents hate her The is no happy ending For the girl who didn’t think

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It's sad how teens end up that way. The choices we make. I'm currently stuck in the middle of one, but I won't make that choice. I know where it leads and I have too much to live for to fall for it. I am adding this to my favorites. Katana

| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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