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Secrets and Lies

Author: Max R.
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Secrets and Lies

The secrets we keep
The lies we tell
Just so we can sneak around
And never get found out

We tell our families
“I’ll be right there.”
When you’re really coming here
You light a match
To mask the smell
Of exactly what
You’ve been doing

Or maybe you’re in a car
With that guy your parents hate
The car is parked
On lover’s leap
And you slide into the back

Or maybe you at that party
With no parents for miles
You drink shot after shot
And jump into your car

That joint you smoked
Was laced with LCD
and now you don’t know what to do

That boy you love
Has someone else on his mind
When he says, “I love you…”

Those shots you drank
The ones you thought you could hold
Are now effecting your driving

The secrets we keep
The lies we tell…

Submitted on 2006-10-16 10:36:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  first i must say the same i say to everryone who has that pic... I LOVE GIR!!! other than that this was a great write and i know a lot of people will be able to relate. keep up the awesome work and i hope to read more by you soon. you area doig great.

| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh! I know this only too well. Too many secrets I keep from my parents and the lies I tell to keep those secrets secret. Theres just too many of them. And I can't go back on any of them. So I hide them in my closet until I'm ready to review them. This is a great poem and I am adding it to my favorites.
| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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