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    dots Submission Name: Heididots
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    Author: Inducted_Kitty
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 309/427/118
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 981
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    Description:
       A poem written for a very special and lovely young woman in my life. Heidi, you will always be in my heart, and forever my friend...

    Always remember, I am here for you ~ always...


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    Eyes as blue as topaz, make me think of summer skies
    A heart as pure as driven snow, so young yet still so wise
    Life has taken much from you, yet still you walk the line
    Your blue eyes shining brightly, your pain in deep disguise...

    Our friendship started slowly
    Then, grew, as time went by
    Became a deep and joyful love
    We know will never die...

    Always will I care for you
    And keep you in my heart
    Even if you're far away -
    We'll never be apart...

    Your smile will always stay with me
    Your sweet and gentle way
    Will help me get through troubled times
    I love you more each day...


    luv you always ~ mom walsh xo




    Submitted on 2006-10-16 12:38:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is the nicest thing anyone has ever done for me. I will cherish it always. Heidi
    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by sunflower78 | [ Reply to This ]


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