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Time Heals All


Author: Lewiskane
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Time Heals All



we fell apart we fell back in
a lover tiff or a haters win?
last winter, last winter what a time
echos, shadows sounds in my mind
i wonder what you feel i wonder if you think
i want to see you cry, i want to see you wink
if you could take it back, i bet you would
i think this was a joke, i never thought i should
best friend your brother
his best friend your lover
we werent selfish we werent wrong
the drinks the smokes the singing songs
im not angry now, you swim through my thoughts
im not hurting now the pains not raw
i still miss you though, and we do still speak
i love you 3 months a bit and a week.




Submitted on 2006-10-16 17:14:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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