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    Author: Poétic Harmonie
    ASL Info:    21/Female/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 44/60/35
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 675
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 896



    Description:
       Unsure of a title for this one, quite a random spur of the moment write, but I'm quite happy with it. Feedback and title suggestions welcome :)


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    Random Talk(??)

    Expressing your inner emotions,
    thoughts playing on your mind,
    flowing from your memory,
    the pen makes sense of them all,
    falling freely onto a blank page.

    The crisp white paper soaking up the ink,
    a perfect canvas for the words,
    a place to make sense of it all,
    of all the complicated things,
    your experiences in life.

    Nothing to hold you back,
    just open your mind and write,
    maybe meaningless words,
    or philosophical thoughts,
    it doesn't even matter,
    just free your head of clutter.

    Freedom of speech comes easily,
    only restricted by you,
    use it and say what you feel,
    even moan if you like,
    relieve yourself of burdens,
    just write your poetic story.
    SCVŠ






    Submitted on 2006-10-16 17:33:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      FYI u posted this like 3 times..on accident i suppose. I think a good title for it would be Creation of the Soul or Soul's Creation or Words from Within or sometihng. i dunno..those were just the titles i ended up typing..i didnt even think of it. good job and keep writing
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]


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