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    dots Submission Name: things about lovedots
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    Author: Ryou_Bakura
    ASL Info:    16/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 35/43/13
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsthings about lovedots
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    You aren’t going to be his first, his last, or his only…
    But if he loves you now,
    he’s loved before, he will again.
    What else matters?
    He’s not perfect. You aren’t either.
    But if he can make you laugh at least once,
    causes you to think twice,
    and he admits to being human,
    and making mistakes,
    hold on to him and give him the most you can,
    he is not going to quote poetry,
    he’s not going to be thinking,
    about you ever moment,
    but he will give you a part of him,
    that he knows you could break,
    don’t hurt him,
    don’t changed… don’t expect more then he can give
    try not to over analyze
    smile whne he makes you happy
    well when he makes you mad
    … and miss him when he’s not there.




    Submitted on 2006-10-16 19:24:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this is great. gotta hold on to what we got. i'll have to remember this. very good points made here, like 'don't expect more than he can give'. i have to admit, i think i'm guilty of that.
    great job,
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]



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