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    dots Submission Name: forbiddendots
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    Author: mimi
    ASL Info:    30/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597/390/111
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Tormented and demented
    led by my carnal needs
    to feed upon the veins
    engorged by your desire,
    to fan the fires
    and bind you to me.
    I stay hidden
    in your dreams
    forbidden.
    So I sing my siren's song
    call to where you dont belong
    awaken you
    to slip outside your bed
    and slip into me.
    Tell you, in the hours before dawn
    I lie naked upon the lawn and wait.
    Trapped as my energy is sapped
    my knees fail to stand the
    onslaught of your touch.




    Submitted on 2006-10-17 17:55:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Passionate and vivid. Interesting details and word game:

    ''to slip outside your bed
    and slip into me''

    Possesses a little bit of darkness which is a great element here. Makes it more spicy. Great piece :-)
    | Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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