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Author: mimi
ASL Info:    30/f/ny
Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111
Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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look at the other one too


Tormented and demented
led by my carnal needs
to feed upon the veins
engorged by your desire,
to fan the fires
and bind you to me.
I stay hidden
in your dreams
So I sing my siren's song
call to where you dont belong
awaken you
to slip outside your bed
and slip into me.
Tell you, in the hours before dawn
I lie naked upon the lawn and wait.
Trapped as my energy is sapped
my knees fail to stand the
onslaught of your touch.

Submitted on 2006-10-17 17:55:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Passionate and vivid. Interesting details and word game:

''to slip outside your bed
and slip into me''

Possesses a little bit of darkness which is a great element here. Makes it more spicy. Great piece :-)
| Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]

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