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Author: mimi ASL Info:    30/f/ny Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111 Words: 91

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Tormented and demented led by my carnal needs to feed upon the veins engorged by your desire, to fan the fires and bind you to me. I stay hidden in your dreams forbidden. So I sing my siren's song call to where you dont belong awaken you to slip outside your bed and slip into me. Tell you, in the hours before dawn I lie naked upon the lawn and wait. Trapped as my energy is sapped my knees fail to stand the onslaught of your touch.

Submitted on 2006-10-17 17:55:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Passionate and vivid. Interesting details and word game: ''to slip outside your bed and slip into me'' Possesses a little bit of darkness which is a great element here. Makes it more spicy. Great piece :-)

| Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]

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