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    dots Submission Name: She's Compulsivedots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 952
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I have recently discovered that I have a slight case of OCD. Just thought I'd write a little bit on it. Lots of criticism highly welcommed!!!


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    dotsShe's Compulsivedots
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    Bears never want to eat grass that is greener than a boys left trainer
    But you may have a slice of my hot apple pie Mrs?
    Bear in mind that I am now in synchronisation for anything that you feel relevant to present
    But I will want to check that everything is secure three times over?

    Bear in mind that I must wash my hands
    I must!
    But you will not see past this over reactive thought that forever recurs in my mind

    And you won't understand
    Because you can't
    Anything I do just becomes
    Relentless to all of you

    She's compulsive




    Submitted on 2006-10-18 06:32:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I find it funny that you would write about your own disorder, but after reading honeycombe dog, I am not supprised. You write about whatever inspires you at any given second, how ever funny or serious, I kind of admire that.
    about your piece, well, I don't know really what to say, I don't think I can critique your own character. Interesting write. See ya.

    ----J U S S y
    | Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by Jussy | [ Reply to This ]


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