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    dots Submission Name: This Lovedots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Not very well thought out, but the feelings are there! its all a mixture of feelings.. I've been with this certain someone for over a year now.. and things are great..:)

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    dotsThis Lovedots

    This love is more than I ever imagined it to be
    I could have never asked for more!
    When you hold me in your arms..
    I melt..
    Every part of me just...
    Just melts...
    You say all the right things..
    At all the right times...
    I awake with a smile on my face..
    Because of you..
    I use to dream of that certain someone..
    But now
    NOW! I dream of you,
    You have become that certain someone..
    This love can only grow from here..
    Please just don't give up ...
    Don't throw in the towl if you ever feel the need to do so..
    Speak up.
    We'll talk..
    This love...
    Has become so much more than I ever pictured...
    And I'd have it NO other way..

    Submitted on 2006-10-18 12:32:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      OMG! This describes everything i feel about my boyfriend. This is a beautiful poem very well written. It flows so nicely together and your choice of words really describes the love you feel fo rthat special someone. Very well done.
    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem, it's good to see you writing about love, keep it up,
    Your Friend, Dean
    | Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]

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