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    dots Submission Name: The Truthdots

    Author: Katana Ryoko
    ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483/428/109
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 698
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Ask if you wanna know what it is I'm talking about.

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    dotsThe Truthdots

    Ask me a question
    I'll tell you the truth
    Even if my answer
    Brings pain to you
    I'll never cheat
    But I will kill or lie
    I'm not normal
    And in my opinion
    No one can say they are
    I've experienced death
    Pain, rape, and love
    Nothing you can tell me
    That will leave me
    Shocked or surprised
    Because I've either
    Done, seen, or heard
    It all before I met you
    I cannot say I'm wise
    I just go by what I have
    And if you keep coming
    Into my path then I'll know
    You aren't going to let
    Me get away that easily

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      mmm... deep deep and still deeper. makes me feel sad deep down inside that you had to go through what you did. But God never gives us more than we can handle, yes? We've all had our struggles, I only pray that all can find the real Truth.
    | Posted on 2007-01-09 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this a lot...like already said I am not entirely sure what it is about it that makes me like it but. It is simple but at the same time it evokes a lot of thought at least to me.
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by FLHgg | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it, don't know what its about but i still like it, i like the last line
    not going to let me get away that easily
    i know i totally mangled it but yeah
    i'll never cheat but i'll kill or lie
    i like that to
    good job
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      It's sad in a world like this where people our age have experienced all this. I can relate to the piece very well.
    worthy of my fave
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by ShadowedAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      nice write...

    i guess you have experienced a lot of things...

    but i mean im sure there are things still out there for you to learn..

    the rhyming was simple but it worked..

    keep itup

    | Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]

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