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Euthanasia Ending


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 127
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Euthanasia Ending



If only experiences could be anything other than false
my hopes might have been lifted
yet, instead, i feel this shadow has loomed over me far too long
to ever be forgiven

the day when blood poured down my eyebrows
i remembered what it was like to bleed
i remembered what it was like to feel like something

tomorrow there better be something great
my actions won't stop losing
my hopes have been cast so distant
now that all my reasons are diffusing

i was lost, in part, in flowers i gave away
their imbued love long died out anyway
If there is remorse, then all forgiveness is purged
i will have to lose more of myself
to forge on decayed on this Earth




Submitted on 2006-10-18 17:17:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This sounds a whole lot more like suicide than euthanasia. There is a difference. If you have terminal cancer and you are going to die anyway then assisted suicide is euthanasia, but shooting yourself in the head because you are depressed is not. If you meant to convey something else by this then I am sorry, but it just seems like a poem about suicide like many others on this site.
LeAnna
| Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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