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    dots Submission Name: Euthanasia Endingdots
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    Author: mrmundane
    ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 47/88/61
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsEuthanasia Endingdots
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    If only experiences could be anything other than false
    my hopes might have been lifted
    yet, instead, i feel this shadow has loomed over me far too long
    to ever be forgiven

    the day when blood poured down my eyebrows
    i remembered what it was like to bleed
    i remembered what it was like to feel like something

    tomorrow there better be something great
    my actions won't stop losing
    my hopes have been cast so distant
    now that all my reasons are diffusing

    i was lost, in part, in flowers i gave away
    their imbued love long died out anyway
    If there is remorse, then all forgiveness is purged
    i will have to lose more of myself
    to forge on decayed on this Earth




    Submitted on 2006-10-18 17:17:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This sounds a whole lot more like suicide than euthanasia. There is a difference. If you have terminal cancer and you are going to die anyway then assisted suicide is euthanasia, but shooting yourself in the head because you are depressed is not. If you meant to convey something else by this then I am sorry, but it just seems like a poem about suicide like many others on this site.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]



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