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Wishful Thinking

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 159
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Average Vote:    5.0000
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Wishful Thinking

What’s changed about this heart?
Well it’s in pain
What’s changed about this face?
It’s just not the same…

Don’t ask me if I’m okay
You won’t like my answer

What’s changed about your heart?
It’s not the same…
What’s changed about your face?
It seems riddled with shame…

Don’t ask me if I’m okay?
I’m sure you don’t care anyway…

Cause what I’m thinking,
Is just wishful thinking
And you laugh in your head
At the things I said
But everything I said to you
Was nothing but the truth....

I know your not going to ask me,
Cause you don’t really care…

I know what I’m thinking
Is just wishful thinking
Cause I never said anything to you
That was ever untrue
How can I expect more?
From someone who just shuts the door

I’m not okay, if you wanted to know
It’s okay, don’t say it… I’ll go…

Submitted on 2006-10-19 04:36:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow, another great write! i have feltthis way too many times in life, when someone you truly trust and adore shuts the door in your face and beckons you leave and bother them not anymore. alas...but you really do have a talent in turning my thoughts (and i'm sure peoples' thoughts in general) into words that pop up on the screen. it flows well, there are a few parts where the rythym is thrown off just a bit, but other than that, i would have to say great job, and i can't wait to read more!
| Posted on 2007-03-07 00:00:00 | by ryeker03 | [ Reply to This ]
  i love this! its so tru, sometimes we will give oour all but people dont care and they ask a question even though they dont care or wanna know about the answer. i love this and i think it is your best peice! it is now on my favs list!

| Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by Shark06 | [ Reply to This ]
  wow... this is absoulty AMAZING!!!! hell its now one of my frav's :)
| Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
  wow this is wonderfull i really like this part:What’s changed about your heart?
It’s not the same…
What’s changed about your face?
It seems riddled with shame…

i like it very well
keep it up

| Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]

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