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    dots Submission Name: If Love was a persondots
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    Author: EmeRalDEyeZ5491
    ASL Info:    16.female.Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 130/137/105
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsIf Love was a persondots
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    If love was a person, She'd be a gorgues beaitful, skinny alluring person. People would be mesmorized by her. but once they became dazed enough, she would lash out and them and kill them, stab by stab, heart beat by heart beat. When she was done with them, she would find another innocent victum to murder once more.




    Submitted on 2006-10-19 14:15:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. For some odd reason, this made me laugh. I agree with you whole-heartedly. Might I suggest a title though? Love personified.
    Christina
    | Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by Super_pudding | [ Reply to This ]


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