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    dots Submission Name: *One Of Lifes Mysteriesdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i dont think this one is very good either..i wrote it when i was half asleep but if u want to waste your time reading it tell me waht you think


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    dots*One Of Lifes Mysteriesdots
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    my love for you grows
    with every passing moment
    reminding me of your wonders
    the way you laugh and smile
    how cute you look when you're mad
    the way you intensely stare into my eyes
    for no apparent reason at all
    all those awkward silences covered up by my laughter
    and you ask me why
    Why?
    i will never know




    Submitted on 2006-10-19 14:18:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Caotic
    I dont know if this is what you were writing about but to me this write is about a Mother who is hugging her child and looking deep into her eyes realizing that Life will be tough in the future but her dear sweet child will always have Mommys Love to help her move forward
    Great Write
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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