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    dots Submission Name: Sadlydots
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    Author: Meotoko
    ASL Info:    18/f/malta
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 46/62/38
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsSadlydots
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    Love can be cruel and
    certainly unkind.
    I wish I could find an
    eternal escape that's all mine.
    But wouldn't that mean suicide?
    People who read this usually
    look at me strangely,
    as if I'm crazy.
    Maybe I am.
    Maybe we all are.
    Feelings are feelings with
    nothing to hide.
    And strangely, I understand them.
    Sadly I see,
    Sad I see,
    Love is lost.
    Peace always escapes our grasping hands.




    Submitted on 2006-10-19 15:03:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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