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    dots Submission Name: Emotional Statedots
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    Author: Meotoko
    ASL Info:    18/f/malta
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 46/62/38
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsEmotional Statedots
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    You ignore me
    You always ignore me.
    I'm nothing to you
    I'm invisible to you
    Now it's my turn
    The tables have turned
    I've blocked you out
    I ignore you.

    You laugh at me
    You laugh about me
    You laugh with your idiotic friends
    It's not fucking funny
    I can't take this torment anymore
    Why do you laugh at me?
    Why haven't I stopped you?
    Stop acting like you care
    I hate your fake sympathy.

    I turn away
    So you don't see the tears
    You make me show weakness
    But the rage makes me stronger
    I can't help but cry
    It's not me that crys
    The rage crys.

    My emotional stress is too high
    Physical pain makes me feel alive
    Emotional pain makes me cry
    Why?
    I wish I knew so I could stop this torture.

    They ignore me
    They all ignore me
    They laugh at me
    They all laugh at me
    It makes me cry in shame.....
    and self-pity.




    Submitted on 2006-10-19 15:04:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lol thats actually really good advice, except for the peeing in someones shoe..


    I really liked reading this, because it displayed alot of differant emotions, the most prominent being unhappiness, perhaps depression even concerning how they made you feel, yet I also sensed another feeling, that made it seem like you didn't WANT to be what they were making you feel, and you were actually TRYING to change that.
    | Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Pprophet | [ Reply to This ]
      wow tough luck gal. Grab yourself up by the bootstraps, find the biggest one of them all wait till she's not looking, then pee in her shoe. That is the answer to all your problems. Mark your territory with urine. See. Learn to laugh. It's not all bad. When you are rich 10 years from not, and they are married to fat bald guys, the freshly urinated shoe will be on the other foot, now wont it. Buck up Skipper!
    | Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by solararia | [ Reply to This ]


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