The Sin
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The Sin
He said I was his sin He said he didn't care He said he'd begin and hoped i didn't scare Now im on the bed He's climbing off of me my eyes are running red This isnt how it should be He's saying i was good says i should be proud I'd kill him could how will i face the crowd? I hate his stupid house i hate his stupid wife i wish he was a mouse so i could end his life i'm supposed to trust you my love is wearing thin nothing you say is true you said i was your sin but i want to be your son. |
Submitted on 2006-10-19 22:45:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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good god man. brutally honest here. a little graphic but nothing that jonathan davis didnt already say years ago. if this happened to you this is good for you, to be sharing and getting this out. if not you are just sick...-sin| | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by sinmore | [ Reply to This ] | ummmm i liked the poem, but it made me want to cry. I hope things better for you, man. | Katty | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by hellsangel | [ Reply to This ] | okay WFT!?!?!?!?!?!?! what the hell is this about? i get the impression that this is about child molestation but i dont know....but its good none the less..... | | Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by Master Bates | [ Reply to This ] | it had good flow and a nice even rythem.....next time work on the touch ups a tad and perhaps give more to it..........i felt like i was picked up and dropped awfully fast.....give it more base, but all in all i was impressed | | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by ropedpoet | [ Reply to This ] | |
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