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    dots Submission Name: how i feeldots
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    Author: Amberger
    ASL Info:    13/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 49/85/24
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Do you believe in fate?
    I have a question for you
    Can anyone help me through this
    All the loneliness of missing you
    If you meet that special man
    He goes slips right out your hand
    I blinked and you were gone
    Leaving me lost and forlorn
    Why do you take such pleasure from twisting up my heart
    The scars you leave they make me weep
    How come you can cut so deep into me
    Im so lost an all alone
    I need a cure please pick up your phone
    To hear the voice I love so much
    Would make me feel were still in touch





    Submitted on 2006-10-20 12:51:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can relate.... This is similar to wat i go through sumtimes, cept i'm a boy so its
    'If you meet the special girl/women' instread.
    I like it, the way that there are a few rhymes but in no real set way shows the inconsistency of life very well
    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by Fryingpan | [ Reply to This ]


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