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    dots Submission Name: i get this feeling...dots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsi get this feeling...dots
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    i get this feeling in my heart
    every time i see you
    then i get these thoughts in my head
    of why i miss you
    after a while im not always fine
    i sometimes find myself crying
    and wishing you were still by myside
    everything i ever do
    i do it still thinking of you
    every memorie kills
    more than ever
    every day that passes by
    i still wish id wake up
    and leave this house
    to go get a kiss from my love
    and never have to say goodbye




    Submitted on 2006-10-20 13:11:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Almost brings a tear to your eye
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]
      aww.. so sweet and thoughtful, I want to thank you for being true to your self.

    Lil_Buddy
    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by Lil_ Buddy | [ Reply to This ]
      So you're talking about me in this poem right? LOL no but seriously I thought it was a good poem. You wanted to say something and you said it outright and with a lot of emotion. Good job. Write more...

    Bloody
    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by BloodyWords | [ Reply to This ]


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