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    dots Submission Name: Where Do I Go From Here?dots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 410
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 912



    Description:
       I am going through a divorce, after three years of wondering when this day would come. I knew what I was doing when I got married, I just didn't want to accept the fact that it was a mistake.. This write isn't wonderful, but it expresses how I feel everyday for the past two months.


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    dotsWhere Do I Go From Here?dots
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    You were my reason to breathe,
    I loved you at all costs,
    But what I didn't realize,
    Was just how much would be lost.

    My sense of pride and self-esteem,
    Would slowly but surely fade,
    I would find no good memories,
    That happy times would've made.

    My heart told me to wait,
    But my mind was to be heard,
    I married you too soon,
    And now my future's blurred.

    I don't know where to go,
    How do I start my life anew?
    To leave you and be alone,
    And never know what to do.

    My thoughts are stuck on this,
    Divorce seems the solution.
    Can I leave it all behind,
    Without all this confusion?

    Would it be a mistake,
    To seek happiness again?
    Can I find what I'm missing,
    And forget where I've been?




    Submitted on 2006-10-20 14:19:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Divorce is hard I know I have been through it but it does get better! keep your head up and yoou will find true love once again. Anyway great poem and if you ever need to talk I'm here.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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