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    dots Submission Name: Why can't I just be medots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsWhy can't I just be medots
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    So many times been in this same predicament
    Don't know which way to go
    I'm setting myself up for hurt again
    But I can't let go

    Im holding onto something that isn't mine
    That never was
    This time it might work
    But I know..
    It never does

    I want to be in love
    It's my right to
    But everytime I seem to make some really
    bad mistakes
    What do I have to do

    Why are the tears I cry
    All that I have to believe
    Why do I depend on you
    Why can't I just be me...




    Submitted on 2006-10-20 15:56:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      OMG I Really Like This Poem Its Great Not being in love Is A Bad Thing I Think All of Us Can Say That But There Are Dis Advantages To Being In Love Where You Life Is No Longer About You Anymore And Everything You Do Needs To Centre On The Both of you
    Ohwell Love Comes To Those Who Deserve it Dont Go Looking For Love Becuase Love Finds you And You Dont Wanna Make The Mitake of Thinking You Found The Special Someone When All You Found Was Someone To Fill The Emptyness
    xXx *Mwah* Luv Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm this is interesting.
    to me, it sounds as if a love sick teenager who wishes to be in love so badly, yet it never seems to work out for her.

    just my perspective.

    good write.
    | Posted on 2007-02-12 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      your looking for love in the wrong place sweety,

    did you know every person is born lonely because we lack something we know is out of our reach,

    that love is our savor, once we have it we can be ourselves and we can truly love others.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2007-01-31 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel that I could relate. Putting on a fake face just to get someone to return your love. Yep been there:( Very good write!
    Keep it up hun,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]


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