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    dots Submission Name: I Think Thatdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Think Thatdots
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    I think that I could learn to love you
    I think that I could learn to love
    I think that I could learn to
    I think that I could learn
    I think that I could
    I think that I
    I think that
    I think
    I






    Submitted on 2004-01-28 10:22:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      *shivers* 'k, goosebumps over here. Very powerful. That last "I". Like you suddenly realized you should have to LEARN to love somebody... dunno, maybe I'm way off. It's still an incredible piece. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, now thats a little freaky, it does get more and more poerful as you read it, and it strangly gives me more power when i read this out loud, amazing
    | Posted on 2004-01-28 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]
      I did print it out going both ways for a college portfolio. I used a really crazy font a two colors of text.
    | Posted on 2004-01-28 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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