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My Heart's Advice

Author: sravenlyn
ASL Info:    17/f/NJ
Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 21 /58 /67
Words: 142
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Love
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My Heart's Advice

My heart once told me that I shouldnt be bothered with people that can not tell how they feel. Fore people that can not tell how they feel have a swolen tongue when it comes to love. They would rather be labled strong and brave the to feel what their heart desires. And because of that I remain with a lonely heart and a cold bedside. I remain without a head to share a pillow with me. And yet my hearts advice doesnt stop me from thinking of one guy all the time, the one guy I cant get out of my mind.

(just added): The guy I want but cant have fore he doesnt want
me. Seeing as that I ant have him... I just think
about him until I get a headache or sick of it... NOW!

Submitted on 2006-10-20 18:28:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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