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    dots Submission Name: Perfectiondots

    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 357
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       I was once asked what my idea of perfection was, and I think its everything. Flaws make you who you are, and everyone is perfect in their own way. I hate that society has labeled the rich and famous, with slim figures and deep pockets as perfection. Me, I am what I call perfect, alongside everyone else.

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    Perfection is something hard to find,
    The thought is often left behind.

    But perfection is hiding, for us to see.
    You just have to look, hear its plea.

    Decieving us all, disguised as flaws.
    The little things distract us all.

    Behind the masks we face each day,
    Lies something gorgeous to display.

    Lost somewhere between lies and regret,
    Perfection is something we all forget.

    But its never ruined or completely gone,
    Society made sure it was withdrawn.

    Take a hard look at what you are,
    And you'll find beauty instead of scars.

    Just study your own horrid reflection,
    Inside every being there is perfection.

    Submitted on 2006-10-20 20:11:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked this one. I love the emotion and wording. Very well done. My favorite line is:

    "Just study your own horrid reflection,
    Inside every being there is perfection."

    Very powerful words there. I love it. Hope to hear from you soon :)


    | Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by Poetic_tragedy6 | [ Reply to This ]

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