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    dots Submission Name: Between You And Medots
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    Author: Foreseer
    ASL Info:    20/F/In Love
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 156/86/23
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1034
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 844



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    dotsBetween You And Medots
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    Why don't you say anything to me?
    You're always so silent.
    Why don't you hold my hand?
    You're always so distant.
    Why don't you like me?
    It's in your eyes.

    I don't want to hurt you,
    and I stay silent.
    I don't want to leave you,
    and I stay away.
    I don't want to like you,
    Stop looking at my eyes.


    You won't hurt me,
    I promise.
    You won't leave me,
    I know it.
    You won't like me,
    Why?

    You're everything to me,
    I don't want to lose you.
    I'd never like you
    because I went directly
    to loving you.




    Submitted on 2006-10-21 01:26:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was wonderful! At first i thought it was going to be heart breaking but it turned out to be a happy ending:) very nice!
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwww I really like it once i got to the end At first i was thinking you need to be more creative with your words but its simplicity makes the ending even better...other wise u would lose its I geuss the word is magic.....that was ausome!
    | Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by lah | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow...
    its amazing
    your a great at this
    keep it up
    would u happen 2 have aim or msn
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Spazxx | [ Reply to This ]


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