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Happy


Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
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Words: 132
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Happy



Im happy,
in pain and im lonely but happy,
if it feels this bad it mustve been great,
but its always to little, always too late,
im still happy.

Im happy,
tears in my eyes but im happy,
you made me smile then broke me down,
thinking of drink, my sorrow to drown,
but im happy.

Im happy,
theres no need to ask i am happy,
not to get people down i joke and i smile,
i try to laugh, to forget for awhile,
am i happy?

Im happy,
where i am in my life i am happy,
new friends in my life it gets better each day,
my smile isnt fake, im so glad to say
i am happy.

Im so happy







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  And the "happys" have it! This speaks of happiness with an awareness that loneliness can be just around the corner (for us all)!!! Beautifully penned, Lou!
| Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Always have to be happy...But it's hard to do living in this world. You have to keep your head up and ignore the hell you're feeling in your neck. lol.
Katana
| Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
  I really liked this. I liked how you touched on the subject of covering up your truw emotions with humor, i do that quite often. Its so true that in society these days everyone excpects you to being energentic and happy at all times, and even fake it if your not. I really connected with this poem and I love your unique writing style. Nice job.
-katherine elisabeth
| Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by Kehuther115 | [ Reply to This ]
  it was different.. i liked it
| Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by Toxic | [ Reply to This ]


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