now i guess you see what i've seen. you're going through what i did... and i hate to say it but you should probably give up like i did. i gave up but at the same time i guess i didn't... because i still love him... he was my best friend all of last year. and i know he cares but yet, he doesn't. everything is a contradiction with him and i feel like there is no hope for him anymore. i'm sorry you had to go through it too. i'm sorry you're still going through it now. i'm sorry people don't change.
I really liked this. It has such a gritty, realistic feeling to it. I have a friend as well who has truobles like this, they never seem to get how important they are to other people. I loved the part "I can only cut so many strings for you", I can really relate to that frustrating feeling of thinking you have done everything toi help but its not working. That last line is especially powerful. I really love your unique writing style, you have talent. Nice job. -Katherine Elisabeth