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all i need...

Author: Black-Death
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all i need...

As i looked into your eyes... i saw that fire that was burning in you for me... when you looked into myn... you saw the emptyness that is now filled by you... as we sit here looking in each others eyes in are bed.... lissing to yelling and screaming... but not careing because i know i have you... and you have me... and thats all we need....

Submitted on 2006-10-21 18:56:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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