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... love...


Author: Black-Death
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... love...



i will not die il wait here for you... il wait in my grave for you to come up for you to come and see me... il wait for you to be happy again... your still here crying over my grave... i watch your face as the tears fall... as the tears fall in my grave making there ways to my face... 6 feet under...




Submitted on 2006-10-21 18:57:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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