Very simple, not very challenging but I absolutely like the title you know: "some lovesong" - drawing in and exact to the content. Style could be better, but I like your content related side - it's just in the right place. Keep writing and don't get discouraged easily!
This reminds me of many poems that I wrote when I was about your age. I would love to tell you it will get better, but I haven't quite reached that point yet myself. As for your poetry though, you have great potential, and I think it will grow into something even more beautiful than it already is. Keep writing, its very therapuetic and you have a knack for it.